Josh, I know you posted this a while ago, but it's never too late for a comment. I think the situation was there and the moment, but it's backlit and too loose. The moment is in this guy's face and with the player. I think with the window where it is, either flash or moving to another spot would have been the best decision. Also, it took a while until I saw the woman on the right side of the bed because of how distracted I was by the left side with the chairs and that cup. I don't mean to be nit-picky, but just want to give some constructive criticism.
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Josh, I know you posted this a while ago, but it's never too late for a comment. I think the situation was there and the moment, but it's backlit and too loose. The moment is in this guy's face and with the player. I think with the window where it is, either flash or moving to another spot would have been the best decision. Also, it took a while until I saw the woman on the right side of the bed because of how distracted I was by the left side with the chairs and that cup. I don't mean to be nit-picky, but just want to give some constructive criticism.
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